Characters are an important part of our writing for without them we'd have nothing to string the scenes together. They are the cohesive glue, substance, and heart that hold the story together. Equally important are the names we give them.
The names we choose should reveal something about our characters: who they are, where they come from or where they are going. If you name your character right, you will choose a name that is unique to your character, memorable to your story and an everlasting brand such as, Rowdy Yates, Daddy Warbucks, Spock, or James Tiberius Kirk.
I love naming my characters. Names come to me easily and usually when I least expect it. My soon-to-be-released book, Code of Honor, is set in the small ficticious Texas town of McTiernan. In the process of building the town, I developed a local older business man who plays an integral part in the lives of McTiernan's residents. While writing the scene describing his business, that of the local auto mechanic, Harlan Garrity popped into my head and I felt as if I’d known him all my life.
On the other hand, I sometimes come up with names I love, but there is no way I can get away with using them. Like for the CEO of the troubled company, Southern Star Airlines. Oren Thatcher popped into my head, shook my hand and sat behind the carved mahogany desk, pipe and all. Alas, a friend pointed out that the name too closely resembles that of Senator Orin Hatch. Yikes! Needless to say, Oren retired unexpectedly, and Nelson 'Nelly' Widmore slid into his leather chair.
Sometimes a name is simply too common to the point of overuse. Last year, while still in the early stages of my story, I came across a post concerning character names. Immediately intrigued, I dived headfirst into the article. The list of tips made sense to me and then I came to Tip #6 – Overused Names. The name, Jack, was precisely mentioned. Well… wait for it…you guessed it. That was my hero’s name. I stewed over the dilemma until one day, while watching a golf match, they introduced a player, Graeme McDowell. Aha! I liked him so much, that between that and enjoying a meal at McAlister's Restaurant, my hero had a new name, Graeme McAlister.
Sometimes a name latches onto a character so firmly that it will never let go. My heroine has been Maggie since her inception. She's been very stubborn and refuses to entertain a new moniker. Did I mention she has red hair? She may even have had relatives from Missouri.
The following are a few tips to consider from a post, http://www.babynames.com/character-names.php, naming the world . . .one baby at a time, when deciding on a name for our characters.
Tip 1: Make the name age-appropriate
The biggest mistake we see writers make is choosing a character name that is not age-appropriate. Many authors make the mistake of choosing a name that is popular now for an adult character--a name that would have rarely been used around the time of that character's birth. Decide the age of your character and then calculate the year your character was born. If your character was born in the U.S., browse the Social Security Name Popularity List for that year. You will also want to take into account the character's ethnic background and the ethnic background of his/her parents.
Tip 2: Choose a name by meaning
Many writers give their characters names that have significance in the story. It could reflect major personality traits, or the character's role in the story. You may want to use our advanced search to search by literal meaning, or think of ways to incorporate other meanings into your character's name. For example, if your character is a botanist, you may not want to name her Flower (too literal), but you may want to consider the names Linnea or Sage. Even if you choose not to name a character by meaning, you should look up the meaning of all your characters' names—there may be something that inspires you or, on the other hand, conflicts with your message.
Tip 3: Exotic romance names are out
Thirty, forty years ago, you would pick up a romance novel and the characters would have ridiculously exotic names like "Crystal Remington" or "Rod Delaware." Same with daytime soap operas. However we're seeing a shift in the past decade or so: romance and soap writers have modernized their character names so readers can relate to them. Naming a romance character should be no different than naming any other fictional character. If you use all the other good character naming tips, you'll create a genuine player to whom your readers can relate.
Tip 4: Science fiction names don't have to sound alien
It's difficult to predict what names will be popular in the year 3000, however you don't have to make your science fiction characters sound like they are from Mars (unless they are). When a person reads (or watches) your story, you don't want them to stumble over a name. The name Zyxnrid, for example, would be difficult to read or listen to every time the character is referenced—and may detract from your overall story. If you do choose to create your sci-fi name, you may want to:
· Combine two common names to make a less common, but pronounceable name. Example: Donica (Donna and Veronica).
· Use ancient mythological names, or combine two of them. Example: Ceres or Evadne.
· Make it easy to pronounce and spell. Example: Bilbo Baggins from Lord of the Rings.
Tip 5: Terms of Endearment
When writing your story, be aware that people who are close rarely use each other's full names. Couples will use nicknames, terms of endearment (honey, dear, boo). What nickname have your characters come up with for each other? Also, parents rarely call their children by their full names--unless they are admonishing them for bad behavior or testifying in court. If you have loving parent characters that are addressing their kids, use a nick name or term of endearment (sweetie, baby, D.J.). An exception to this would be if you want to show the parent character being cold and distant to their child.
Tip 6: Overused Names
For some reason, every writer loves to name his hero JACK. I know it's a tough-sounding, honest-working name, but naming your hero Jack is like naming your son AIDAN. It's overdone. Be a little more creative, so your reader will remember your particular protagonist as opposed to the umpteen-million other books they've read about Jack. Also, do not give your protagonist the initials J.C. as an allusion to Jesus Christ. That tactic was overused in 60's/70's fiction and is almost laughable by today's standards.
Tip 7: Loaded Names
Watch out for what we call "loaded" names--names that have a popular association. These could be names associated with celebrities, historical or infamous people like Adolf, Oprah, or Kobe. They could also be names of famous literary, tv, or movie characters: Hannibal, Scarlett, Romeo, Bart. If you do choose to use "loaded" names, then you really should make it part of the story, part of the character. Your character's mother was obsessed with Gone With the Wind, so she was named Scarlett--how has it affected her throughout her life? How does it affect her in the story?
Tip 8: Have Fun With Names
Have fun with naming your characters and take time to see what "fits." What was your character's childhood nickname? Is that an embarrassment when his parents address him in front of his friends? Did your character change his name at any point in his/her life? If so, why? Does your female character want to change her surname when she gets married? Why or why not? Names are such an important part of one's identity, don't take it lightly with your story!
Great post, Carra. I love choosing names for my characters. I use a lot of family names for historicals and names I've heard for contemporary.ReplyDelete
Thank you, Caroline. You pick wisely, grasshopper, for I've always liked your character names. ;-)Delete
Interesting post, Carra. Thanks for sharing your list of things to be aware of when naming characters. May I add one? Be aware of "gender shift." Some names that in times past were associated with one gender now are more closely associated with the opposite gender. Marion, Connie, and Lupe/Guadalupe (all semi-popular for men in the late 1800s/early 1900s) are examples. Even when reading a historical, some readers have strong reactions to male characters with names that don't seem masculine enough by contemporary standards. On the other hand, readers seem more than willing to accept female characters with masculine names. Go figure. :-DReplyDelete
Oh, Kathleen, you're right. "Gender shift" is a good one to add and it hadn't crossed my mind although it should have. I had a grandfather named Carroll. If a boy carried the moniker, Connie or Gail these days he'd probably become a serial killer. Women's names have shifted, too, with names such as Sidney or Harper. Thank you for visiting and commenting today.Delete
I love naming my characters, too. One of my favorites is a secondary character in Much Ado About Marshals, Bosco Kunkle. Bosco was my brother's dog and I also used his personality. Kunkle is my cp's last name. I thought the two together made a fun, comedic combination. Another character from that book is Sidney Adler. I intentionally made that a soft name because he's a little guy but is surprisingly effective as a lawman, so is sort of a sleeper. Then the heroine's family name is Gardner, so her name is Daisy, her sister's is Iris, and her brother's name is Forrest.ReplyDelete
Haven't had a Jack yet. Maybe I should. :)
Now, Bosco Kunkle is a name that could really stay in the reader's mind. Love it. Love your books, too, Jacquie! Thanks for stopping by today. ;-)ReplyDelete
I'm Lik eyou sometimes the name just pops right out, like Isabella Mumpphrey. I was describing the character to a writer friend, she asked her name and Pop! Out came Isabella! If a name doesn't come to me like that, then I decide the nationality or their family background and work from that to come up with a name that I like.ReplyDelete
Your suggestions are all great ones.
I also go to old cemeteries and write down the names that strike a chord with me. I don't use the whole name just random first and last names.
Going to the cemetery for age or era appropriate names is a great idea. Thanks, Paty, I'm glad you enjoyed the post.ReplyDelete
Awesome post! Keep up the great work! ��ReplyDelete