Showing posts with label naming characters. Show all posts
Showing posts with label naming characters. Show all posts

Sunday, February 4, 2018

When the Villain Won't Cooperate @JacquieRogers #western #HeartsOfOwyhee #amwriting


Not "TheEnd." Yet.

Good News: Caroline Clemmons finished Daniel McClintock and I'm bouncy-happy that I'll finally get to read that book!  You can read about her new release in her last SGRR post, Typing the End of the Book!
Bad News: My next book, Much Ado About Mail-Order Brides (Hearts of Owyhee #6), which was supposed to release this week, is only half done.

I know, I know--it's killin' me! 

But sometimes stories pour onto the page and sometimes it takes a jackhammer.  This one's taking a jackhammer.  But first it ran over me with a steamroller.  Even bruised and battered, I'm rethinking and finally this book is revealing itself to me.  If there's one trait that a writer absolutely must have, it's tenacity. 

That's a nice word for stubbornness.

What's in a name? That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet." 
Romeo and Juliette, Act II, Scene II

It all started when I realized that my villain's name didn't sound like a Manhattan dance teacher, so I found the perfect name for him.  But then that character absolutely refused to be a bad guy.  Maybe a medium bad guy, but not intentionally even at that. 

So then I needed a bad bad guy.  Really bad.  He barged in like nobody's business--he must've been waiting for his casting call all along.  This fellow is nasty baaad.  Perfect!

But...two villains?  That don't know each other?  Suddenly I have too many coincidences, and that's not good, either.

Ripple effect.

You'd think changing one character's name wouldn't be that big of a deal.  Just do a search and replace.  But it turns out that names are too powerful to be dealt with in such a flippant manner.  If they can be, then you have the wrong name for sure. 

The act of search and replace turns the ripple effect into a tsunami.



Now I have to go back through the entire first half of the book and find places where I can interject a little foreshadowing, plus both the bad guy and the bad bad guy need to have backstories and even more important--viable reasons for being in Silver City at the exact time the story is set, which is October, 1885.  This will affect at least six chapters and over a dozen scenes.  Some of them will have to be tossed and written anew.

I'm not a fan of rewriting.

But hey, I do feel great that I now know why writing the first half of this book has been a slog.  I feel energized!  My Muse has finally visited me, the story is unfolding, the characters are letting me in, and all that makes me a very happy gal.

So the book will be late, as will Honey Beaulieu #4, since I haven't even started on it yet.  Here it is, February 4, and I'm already two months behind on my publishing schedule.  LOL.  Maybe I should reassess, ya think?

Stay tuned for the new release announcement for Much Ado About Mail-Order Brides (Hearts of Owyhee #6) sometime in March--maybe even by my next schedule blog post!

Until then, happy reading and/or writing!



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Tuesday, May 2, 2017

THE NAME GAME

By Caroline Clemmons

Who knew choosing names for characters was such a big deal?

When I first began publishing, choosing a name wasn’t so hard. I looked for strong names for men and era appropriate names for women. For villains, I used names of people who had, historically, caused my family harm. As my list of books grew, so did the difficulty of choosing character names.
I have to admit I’ve goofed a few times. I have two stories in which the heroine is named Beth, short for Elizabeth, because that’s a name I love and one which repeats in my family. In two books, I use McDonald as the hero’s surname although the books are not linked in any way.

For each series, I keep a bible (not as in The Bible) of facts and characters. Each character’s name includes a brief description and occupation if important. You’d think this would keep me on target, but I still goofed on the Stone Mountain (Texas) series. A deputy sheriff started with the nickname Buster (named for my wonderful late brother-in-law Buster Reed) and suddenly appeared as Sheriff Butch Parrish in a later book. Oops! I’d plead temporary befuzzlement because I’d just written a post on Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid for another blog, but that’s really no excuse.

Now I keep a list of each book’s title plus names of hero and heroine and heroine’s hair and eye color. Since my personal hero has dark hair and blue eyes, so do my storybook heroes unless I need (rarely) to vary the pattern. I did for Eduardo Montoya in the Stone Mountain (Texas) series and Nathaniel Bartholomew in the Kincaid series.  For historical names, I rely on my ancestry. Our family used some names that are real doozies, but I love unusual names of each period—Parmelia, Delthene, Atheline, Venice.

One year I attended a seminar at a Romance Writers of America Conference on naming characters. The presenter suggested using names with strong consonants with a hard sound of K, D, and T for a hero. Also, she suggested strong mental images for a hero's name. I hope I’ve done that for the surnames of Stone, Hunter, Kinkaid, McClintock, Knight, and others.

Authors of numerous books face this challenge. I’m sure of this because on author-only loops I see posts asking for name suggestions. Eventually we become stumped.

Sometimes, we let readers choose a name as part of a contest. I did that for O’NEILL’S TEXAS BRIDE, McClintocks book 2. Linda Clayton won naming rights but couldn’t decide between Stella and Nettie Sue Clayton for the heroine. I made Stella Clayton the heroine of that book and the heroine of McCLINTOCK’S RELUCTANT BRIDE, McClintock’s book 3, became Nettie Sue Clayton.

That was fun, so I thought I’d do that again. Someone who leaves a comment on this posts can choose the name for the heroine of an upcoming book—IF I haven’t already used the name. Upcoming books include a heroine in 1887. 

Any suggestions? If so, please leave them in a comment. In addition to character naming rights, the winner gets a $20 Amazon card.


Tuesday, July 16, 2013

What's in a Name?


Characters are an important part of our writing for without them we'd have nothing to string the scenes together. They are the cohesive glue, substance, and heart that hold the story together. Equally important are the names we give them.

The names we choose should reveal something about our characters: who they are, where they come from or where they are going. If you name your character right, you will choose a name that is unique to your character, memorable to your story and an everlasting brand such as, Rowdy Yates, Daddy Warbucks, Spock, or James Tiberius Kirk.

I love naming my characters. Names come to me easily and usually when I least expect it. My soon-to-be-released book, Code of Honor, is set in the small ficticious Texas town of McTiernan. In the process of building the town, I developed a local older business man who plays an integral part in the lives of McTiernan's residents. While writing the scene describing his business, that of the local auto mechanic, Harlan Garrity popped into my head and I felt as if I’d known him all my life.

On the other hand, I sometimes come up with names I love, but there is no way I can get away with using them. Like for the CEO of the troubled company, Southern Star Airlines. Oren Thatcher popped into my head, shook my hand and sat behind the carved mahogany desk, pipe and all. Alas, a friend pointed out that the name too closely resembles that of Senator Orin Hatch. Yikes! Needless to say, Oren retired unexpectedly, and Nelson 'Nelly' Widmore slid into his leather chair.

Sometimes a name is simply too common to the point of overuse. Last year, while still in the early stages of my story, I came across a post concerning character names. Immediately intrigued, I dived headfirst into the article. The list of tips made sense to me and then I came to Tip #6 – Overused Names. The name, Jack, was precisely mentioned. Well… wait for it…you guessed it. That was my hero’s name. I stewed over the dilemma until one day, while watching a golf match, they introduced a player, Graeme McDowell. Aha! I liked him so much, that between that and enjoying a meal at McAlister's Restaurant, my hero had a new name, Graeme McAlister.

Sometimes a name latches onto a character so firmly that it will never let go. My heroine has been Maggie since her inception. She's been very stubborn and refuses to entertain a new moniker. Did I mention she has red hair? She may even have had relatives from Missouri.

The following are a few tips to consider from a post,  http://www.babynames.com/character-names.php,  naming the world . . .one baby at a time, when deciding on a name for our characters. 


Tip 1: Make the name age-appropriate

The biggest mistake we see writers make is choosing a character name that is not age-appropriate. Many authors make the mistake of choosing a name that is popular now for an adult character--a name that would have rarely been used around the time of that character's birth. Decide the age of your character and then calculate the year your character was born. If your character was born in the U.S., browse the Social Security Name Popularity List for that year. You will also want to take into account the character's ethnic background and the ethnic background of his/her parents.

Tip 2: Choose a name by meaning

Many writers give their characters names that have significance in the story. It could reflect major personality traits, or the character's role in the story. You may want to use our advanced search to search by literal meaning, or think of ways to incorporate other meanings into your character's name. For example, if your character is a botanist, you may not want to name her Flower (too literal), but you may want to consider the names Linnea or Sage. Even if you choose not to name a character by meaning, you should look up the meaning of all your characters' names—there may be something that inspires you or, on the other hand, conflicts with your message.

Tip 3: Exotic romance names are out

Thirty, forty years ago, you would pick up a romance novel and the characters would have ridiculously exotic names like "Crystal Remington" or "Rod Delaware." Same with daytime soap operas. However we're seeing a shift in the past decade or so: romance and soap writers have modernized their character names so readers can relate to them. Naming a romance character should be no different than naming any other fictional character. If you use all the other good character naming tips, you'll create a genuine player to whom your readers can relate.

Tip 4: Science fiction names don't have to sound alien

It's difficult to predict what names will be popular in the year 3000, however you don't have to make your science fiction characters sound like they are from Mars (unless they are). When a person reads (or watches) your story, you don't want them to stumble over a name. The name Zyxnrid, for example, would be difficult to read or listen to every time the character is referenced—and may detract from your overall story. If you do choose to create your sci-fi name, you may want to:

· Combine two common names to make a less common, but pronounceable name. Example: Donica (Donna and Veronica).

· Use ancient mythological names, or combine two of them. Example: Ceres or Evadne.

· Make it easy to pronounce and spell. Example: Bilbo Baggins from Lord of the Rings.

Tip 5: Terms of Endearment

When writing your story, be aware that people who are close rarely use each other's full names. Couples will use nicknames, terms of endearment (honey, dear, boo). What nickname have your characters come up with for each other? Also, parents rarely call their children by their full names--unless they are admonishing them for bad behavior or testifying in court. If you have loving parent characters that are addressing their kids, use a nick name or term of endearment (sweetie, baby, D.J.). An exception to this would be if you want to show the parent character being cold and distant to their child.

Tip 6: Overused Names

For some reason, every writer loves to name his hero JACK. I know it's a tough-sounding, honest-working name, but naming your hero Jack is like naming your son AIDAN. It's overdone. Be a little more creative, so your reader will remember your particular protagonist as opposed to the umpteen-million other books they've read about Jack. Also, do not give your protagonist the initials J.C. as an allusion to Jesus Christ. That tactic was overused in 60's/70's fiction and is almost laughable by today's standards.

Tip 7: Loaded Names

Watch out for what we call "loaded" names--names that have a popular association. These could be names associated with celebrities, historical or infamous people like Adolf, Oprah, or Kobe. They could also be names of famous literary, tv, or movie characters: Hannibal, Scarlett, Romeo, Bart. If you do choose to use "loaded" names, then you really should make it part of the story, part of the character. Your character's mother was obsessed with Gone With the Wind, so she was named Scarlett--how has it affected her throughout her life? How does it affect her in the story?

Tip 8: Have Fun With Names

Have fun with naming your characters and take time to see what "fits." What was your character's childhood nickname? Is that an embarrassment when his parents address him in front of his friends? Did your character change his name at any point in his/her life? If so, why? Does your female character want to change her surname when she gets married? Why or why not? Names are such an important part of one's identity, don't take it lightly with your story!


Thanks for visiting Smart Girls Read Romance today. I hope you enjoyed how I choose my character's names and liked the tips shared from www.babynames.com . Leave a comment to share tips of your own.