Have you ever read a book that made you hungry? I was reading one the other day and by the end of the scene I wanted minestrone and a glass of wine. It was kind of a fitting scene since at work we are having a soup and salad potluck this week, and I shall be bringing lentil minestrone (all the dessert slots were empty and it's a soup and salad potluck).
[here's the recipe I'll be using. I substitute spinach for kale though, since no one in my family likes kale]
There are two authors I can think of off-hand whose books always make me crave whatever it is the characters are eating. Both write in such a different style than I do, that I think describing the meal to the point the food is so detailed you make the reader hungry is usually only seen in certain genres. I just don't know if I can pause the scene where a serial killer is after someone long enough to describe the meal. Then again, words are literally my job, and I like to think I'm pretty good with them, so maybe I could absolutely pull it off!
I'm going to have to ponder this. I wonder if readers are reading and thinking, "What did the characters eat for lunch?" Or even "Have the characters eaten lunch?" I think if I'm reading an action scene, I might not worry about it, but then again, don't they need the calories if they're on the run? I mean, if I'm running for my life, am I thinking about food at all? Or am I thinking that I can't run another step if I don't get a decent supper? Or are we picturing a villain chasing them while the main characters try to scarf down some fast food like this poor chap:
As I said, I don't typically describe the foods in my books to the extent that I think I would make anyone hungry. It's not really relevant to my story, but I'm wondering if maybe at least once per book I should really go all in on a meal for my poor hungry characters!
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One of my favorite series was Diane Mott Davidson's Goldy Bear Culinary Myseries. I would have said it was because of the characterization, not the food, but I really enjoyed it, so maybe... A fun post, Laura!
ReplyDeleteThanks! Now I'm hungry again LOL
DeleteI think meal descriptions are more a cozy mystery thing than a romantic suspense thing, especailly since so many cozies involve people who work or own bakeries or resturants.
ReplyDeleteThat's a really good point!
DeleteOh, Laura, I just wrote a scene in which I mentioned the food my heroine had--but it's because she'd run out of money on her travels and was so hungry she almost fainted a couple of times. I just finished a Nora Roberts' in which she described foods several times, but it was in the follow-up scene after danger. The heroine was a great cook who'd just had her kitchen remodeled.
ReplyDeleteNora Roberts is one who I was thinking of! She always makes me hungry! LOL
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