By Mary Adair
To begin writing without an idea of the ending of my
story is like driving on a deserted road at night in a car with no
headlights. Knowing how my novel will end helps me remain focused throughout the
writing process. Now, my ending doesn’t have to be etched in stone, but I
should have some idea of the ending. However, using an ending for an ending’s sake would
undermine my process as well.
END ON AN EVENTFUL AND EMOTIONAL NOTE
Ambiguous endings are just as detrimental to the writing
process as not having an ending at all. An example of an ambiguous ending would
be something like: Vanessa knew what she had to do: let go, and allow Rick to
love her. That’s not a clear ending. The solution is to end on an event or
physical action that expresses that idea. Emotionally, end on a note that
expresses the fact that she has let go. Something as simple as an embrace
between Vanessa and Rick with her crying is both a physical and emotional
ending that could work, especially if Vanessa has refrained from having any
physical or emotional contact with Rick throughout the story. Of course I can
build up to that moment throughout the story. But that’s the point. I have
something tangible that I can build towards while writing my story. Now I could
create all kinds of physical and emotional tension as I build towards that
ending.
Vanessa loves Rick |
HOW TO GENERATE IDEAS FOR ENDINGS
A good rule of thumb in trying to come up with an ending
before I write is to start with a premise and end on a conclusion that opposes
that premise. For example, if I want to do a story about a bright, beautiful
recent med school grad who has never had a boyfriend (something she’s sworn off
since she witnessed her father cheating on her mother years ago with her grade
school teacher), then my premise could be something like: Love will never find
a place in Amy’s heart. That is a premise, and the end will ideally confirm or
refute that theory or premise. So, a simple ending could be Amy marries Mark.
Notice how the ending is tangible: marriage.
Amy and Mark |
Simple enough, right?
Here are some other examples of endings: Chloe and Bill make
love, Jason proposes to Erin, Lisa arrives in Paris where Blake is waiting for
her, Nicky introduces Rob to her parents, Marley and Eric take a vacation to
the Caribbean after she’s informed that she no longer has cancer.
Those of course can be fleshed out in more detail, but those
are concrete events that can signal a story’s ending. Notice how they can guide
the writer from the beginning.
How I might look writing my novels, coffee in hand. |
Writing a novel without the guide of an ending is very
difficult. Inspiration will only get the writer so far; writing without an
ending in mind will get me to page 20 or maybe 30, however I won’t really know
where my characters are headed. Knowing where I’m headed can take the pressure
off while writing. As one published writer put it: “send your characters to
hell and back, as long as you know where back is.”
Thanks for your insight into how you work towards the ending in your writing. You're right -- how can you get to a destination if you don't know where you're headed? Good post.
ReplyDeleteMary, you hit the nail on the head with this post. I have to have a road map for my novel even if I take side trips along the way.
ReplyDeleteExcellent post, Mary.
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